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Write a reviewdont know why some hate this its good why does everybody expect that everybody will write a 10/10 book as a fanfiction . .
Only listen to the positives, i like your story and also donβt listen to the stupid people only listen to the ones who have constructive criticism
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Excellent story and keep it up ππππππππβοΈβοΈπππ ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβοΈππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Reveal SpoilerNice story. ,. .got a lot of potential. .please update more chapter, i was curious to know if he became a hero or just study at general department.
dont know why some hate this its good why does everybody expect that everybody will write a 10/10 book as a fanfiction . .
Only listen to the positives, i like your story and also donβt listen to the stupid people only listen to the ones who have constructive criticism
Repost? I think i have read this before πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»πΊπ»
has potential but feels uncomfortable for some reason the dialogues---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Excellent story and keep it up ππππππππβοΈβοΈπππ ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβοΈππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Nice story. ,. .got a lot of potential. .please update more chapter, i was curious to know if he became a hero or just study at general department.